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Dear writer,
      Nice writting, I enjoyed the story. I think the writer've done a really best story. Good pace, good characterization, and interesting viewpoint.I feeel that the story would have worked just as well if the abused boy was not someone already known to him. I would imagine Kana's punishment would be his conscience which would continue to torment him as long as he lives. Even when he owns a chain of car washing business in future, the guilt should weigh down on him.

The Princess Mouse

      What a lovely fairytales! Its a beatiful story, specially it have a deeper message that by unconditional live even a mouse can be turned into a princess.

      The Mikko's brother is so rude cause want to kill the little mouse. But when the little mouse turned into a princess, he quite shocked and get a little bit jealous. But his own bride was really nice too, so he could not deel too bad and he must be thankful.

      A little mouse was very kind cause she helped Mikko to proof that Mikko has a sweetheart. Even she knows that she just a little mouse, she won't give up and called all the mice to help her to prove it to Mikko's father and Mikko's brother.

     This is the most favorite story that I have read! Really love it 💖

A Mouse Deer and A Tiger

      My comments of the story is be a good person to lie for safe your own life. Be like a mouse deer.

      Think smart, if there is a will there is way. There will be something that keeps you away from what you want, but don't give up. Just think and think again, and then you will find a way that can lead you to your goal.

      The deer is so smart. Sometimes, we just need some wisdom when we face such a challenge or danger. And the mouse deer was clever in trying to resolve its predicament. Though it used thickery to get what it wanted. But it was brilliant idea.

An Enlightening Tale

      I love this story. It is a wonderful story which is teaching people to be honest. So they can recieve a good result.

      The honesty is the most important, no matter what is the problem or your necesities. There is not other way to make you feel better that being honest with yourself.

      But, the question is why is there a ring in every loaf or bread? There must be good reason for this. However, I cannot imagine the beggar still having his teeth after repeatedly breaking his mollars though.

      To me, the butler knows that the beggar is related to the house. The beggar was indeed a forgetful owner at the house in the past. He lost everything he owned because he was greedy and dishonest. Now, if he return the diamond ring after breaking all his tooth, then the butler will help him to get back his home.

The Frog Prince

      My comments for this story tale is I love this story and I think this story is the nicer story that I've read and it's a truly blasing story that I've watched before. The princess not make a mistake of the promise because she thought that the frog is too ugly for her to eat in the same plate or sleep on the same bed or maybe room, so she decided to do not fulfill her promise.

      But when she asked her father who was a King, the King said even the promise is not too relevant, she still need to fulfill her promise by hook or by crook. So the princess did it for 3 days and suddenly the frog turned to a handsome and hot prince til' the princess fell in love with the prince. And lastly, they're getting married ✨

      I think she treated the prince like trash  when he was a frog eventhough she made a promise. And I think the princess could ever know that a frog and her promise has change her real life.