Dear writer,
Nice writting, I enjoyed the story. I think the writer've done a really best story. Good pace, good characterization, and interesting viewpoint.I feeel that the story would have worked just as well if the abused boy was not someone already known to him. I would imagine Kana's punishment would be his conscience which would continue to torment him as long as he lives. Even when he owns a chain of car washing business in future, the guilt should weigh down on him.
Nice writting, I enjoyed the story. I think the writer've done a really best story. Good pace, good characterization, and interesting viewpoint.I feeel that the story would have worked just as well if the abused boy was not someone already known to him. I would imagine Kana's punishment would be his conscience which would continue to torment him as long as he lives. Even when he owns a chain of car washing business in future, the guilt should weigh down on him.